Tuesday, March 26, 2024

Nostalgic shyr

The below shyr, though out of meter (wazan)- still gives goosebumps. Years ago, it was said by a girl I promised to revisit but ended up cancelling my trip to Pakistan with a petty excuse.

 


 

2 comments:

bsc said...

My apologies before I quote something that came to my mind after reading such a wonderful sh'r which is certainly Dil ko lagta hay
But in my village when Farmer children were introducd to the English language that did not suit the simple minded people they invented their own way of "application"
O my master come come come
Goday goday water meenh chham chham
Sir pe basta gir paday ham
iss liyay fidvee did not come

mystic-soul said...

wah!
beautiful!!