Saturday, December 10, 2011

Aik Sher!

I am not sure is this sher belongs to Mohsin Bhopali or Mohsin Naqvi, as both used same takhallus - (or some other Mohsin) - but its worth sharing..

Over centuries history changed as bit Mohsin
Than age was stoned, now people are stoned!

4 comments:

Rida said...

Zabardast

Mystic said...

bsc said...

دونوں مصرعوں کا وزن الگ الگ ہے
مگر بات بہت پتے کی ہے جواب نہیں

ممکن ہے آپ نے شعر 'کوٹ' کرنے میں کچھ چھوڑ دیا ہو

mystic-soul said...

Mujeh bhi shaq hai ke ye kisi mustand shayer ka sher hai ke nahi - magar beshaq 'khayal' bohat umda hai...