Monday, April 18, 2011

The Last Kiss

I bumped to Rohit's blog by accident (was it?) and loved his short stories. His recent ultra short story "The Last Kiss" is just brilliant. In few lines he was able to put all the emotional turmoil when 2 hearts depart forever.

"Sometimes it doesn’t matter how we start. What remains with us, most of the times, is the way we end it. And these moments of finality of their relationship were going to haunt their lives for longer than they had imagined. In their quest of lost individuality, what they realized had lost was, the beauty of their togetherness. The same togetherness which was, once upon a time, beautified by their individuality....."

Read full story here (click)

5 comments:

Rohit Kumar said...

hey buddy.. thanx for d kind words :)

mystic said...

You are very welcome! you deserved the praise...

Anonymous said...

Lovely excerpt!

mystic said...

anhaan, Baraka - you are still around,.... cool.......It was nice to find you...

Rohit Kumar said...

@ Rickshawdiaries... thanx mate!